Sunday, October 20, 2013

Tomulin Analysis


In Switch It Around, there is usage of data, warrants, and backing helps to enhance the blog on the topic that bullies should have their own programs and consoling to help them out of problems that cause them to bully. The data used in the blog is talking about a test that was run in the United States and United Kingdom that showed the third leading cause to teenage death is suicide and half of these suicides are due to bullying. The country should be trying there upmost hardest to not let this happen among the teenagers that are trying to make it in this world. But yet, bulling is occurring more and more. The warrant then comes in on how there are ways of help for the ones being bullied but none for the bully. Yes, the one being bullied is vulnerable and should be taken care of but the bully should have the same rights as well. The bully should be looked at as a person as well that is fighting battles and is causing battles to forget about the ones he or she is facing. Though not normal to take the enemy’s side, the warrant helps to bring in the main claim that is presented. Although there are many ways for someone to get help that is being, there is no real known program for the bullies. There should be a program that helps bullies out of bulling and with any internal issues they may have so that there will be less bullies and less suicides occurring. By starting at the root of the problem, the problem can be stopped all together. If there is no change in the bullies life that is causing the bully to bully others, then the bully will continue on and more lives will be taken. These are few backings that help support the main claim and the warrant. The blog shows that maybe the ways we are looking at bullying now isn’t the right ways and that there should be a change to help stop what is hurting the lives of many teenager around the world.

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